Posts by CanadianLaws

Hi, I hope you dont mind me asking but can I be one of your kits? Thx for your time

Thx

One of the kits (I dont care what his name is as long as he looks like my avatar please) kicks Silvertail's stomach, getting a bit cramped.

Ok, I dont mind.

The kit, feeling cramped by his sibling(s), struggles to move around.

This is NOT a contest (for those of you who want a prize). I was searching every where for a noncontest thread to post my writing, but I couldnt find one. I made this thread to be creative, but not too creative.
Rules:
1. MUST be PG related content (no cussing or graphic content. Keep things clean here, alright?).
2. DO NOT critize people's work like: That was horrible! or You should have never posted that!
I will allow constructive critizism like: I love the colors on that cat, but you need to focus more on details and less on colors. or That poem was great, but you need to work on some grammer mistakes.
3. IF, you meant to make an error or put something people would not understand, please note it.
4. DO NOT ask me what you get out of this, as I posted above, this is not a contest.
5. DONT steal other's ideas. If they give you their permission, have them pm me.
6. Have fun!

Here is a poem I wrote:
No One Sees

No one sees a beautiful viper,
All they see is a venomous monster

No one sees a respect-deserving crocodile,
All they see is a killing machine

No one sees a magestic moniter,
All they see is a killer equipped with teeth

Well I see what you dont see,
The way things truely are

I see a magestic moniter,
I see how beautiful God created it

I see a respect-deserving crocodile,
I see how bold God created it

I see a beautiful viper,
I see how interesting God created it

All those things are what I see,
For they are God's creatures, two

OOC: Sorry I was inactive for a while... I am guessing I am nightkit

OOC: I might... I will pm her and ask

IC: Nightkit mewed a bit when Dreamkit fell ontop of her, trying to pull his head from under her.

OOC: I am waiting for a response if you were talking to me... I really hate how she doesnt get out of school until 5 pm my time, which is in two hours.

IC: Nightkit lifted his head, inhaling his father's scent. He flinched a bit, not knowing who it was and slowly crawled back to his mother.

OOC: Yeah, but she says she has afterschool tutorials or something so she gets home an hour late.

Nightkit flicked his ears at the noise.

Nightkit mewed, trying to replicate the words but cant quite sound them out right.

Nightkit's ears flicked in his sleep, hearing his parents. He stretehces a bit before becoming still again and drifting back into sleep.

Hey! I am older than me mum!... How did that happen?

And I agree w/ shadow (sorry if i only call you by the first word of your name some times, it is a habit). I am the same age as him and I believe 7th graders are too young to date.

Nightkit stretched a bit for lifting his head, just waking up. He opened his eyes and looked up at the cats before him, seeing how big he was compared to them for the first time.

He jumped to his paws and looked around, wanting to explore as he crawled around the den, a bit cautious at first.

He smiled a bit and then ran back over to his parents, still amazed at how big they were.

He looked at his parents and then jumped up onto shadowscar's back, wanting to play.